Friday, 3 May 2013

Here is the brand new book, escape! It is the first book out of a series of 4, I am currently working on the 2nd.
Escape! Escape!






Escape! Escape! No.1


 

Contents

Chapter 1 Aunt Rebecca

Chapter 2 Escape

Chapter 3 Inside the big house

Chapter 4 In the gardens

Chapter 5 A mysterious face and an unusual lace

Chapter 6 A listen through the door and a great big shock

Chapter 7 Following the men and running

Chapter 8 Spying again, running again and back to the house again

Chapter 9 Missing men

Chapter 10 Missing paper

Chapter 11 Until next time


 

No.1 Escape!

Chapter 1

Aunt Rebecca

 

My name is Alice, I am nine years old and this is my story, it all started when I ran away from home. I lived with my Aunt Rebecca in a small, old cottage. The reason I ran away was because my Aunt Rebecca was horrid, she told you off practically all the time, even when you hadn’t really done anything! For example, if she told me to put the washing out and I didn’t do it for another minute or two she would spank me with a wooden spoon. She didn’t really care about me, but I did feel slightly sorry for her. The only reason that she was as nasty as she was is because when she was younger (twelve to be exact) she owned a dog. It was meant to be a family dog, but really she was the one who fed it, walked it and had any liking for it at all, so Aunt Rebecca thought of it as her own. The thing was that the dog lived for a surprisingly long time; it died when she was twenty-nine. That was when she became unkind. Here was a dog that she had loved and cared for for seventeen years that had died. That’s why I felt

sorry for her, I mean, she’d been living an un-happy life for thirty years, you can’t exactly blame her for being rude and spiteful after that amount of time of being sad. But I simply felt that I couldn’t put up with her awful telling off for any longer, so I ran away.

 

Chapter 2

Escape

It was the twenty-first of September when I decided to run away, I made my plans to get away the next day so I packed a small bag full of clothes, shoes, water and food. I waited until 1:30am the next morning and then made my escape. I reached under my bed to get my bag and then crept out into the landing; I snuck down the creaky stairs, trying not to make a noise. The key to the front door was inside a little pouch under the rug, I found the key and opened the door, I ran outside and left the key under the doormat. It was pouring with rain so I had to run quickly to try and find a shelter. It was cold, so I wrapped a shawl from my bag around myself. A big tree was standing near me, I slipped and slid over the wet leaves and sat down under the big tree. I waited there and thought about how I was going to survive once all my food had gone. “I know!” I said out loud, “I need to find an old abandoned house somewhere that I can live in and maybe find some old food there.” The next day,(after very little sleep) I set off again, it was quite sunny compared to the day before! I kept walking until I came to a tall, grassy hill, I decided to go to the top and see what was there (if anything) so I grabbed a tuft of grass and hauled myself up a little so I could get my balance. I kept doing this until I reached the top of the hill.

Chapter 3

Inside the big house

 At the top of the hill, well I find it hard to put into words, but there was a gigantic, tumbledown, old, ivy-covered mansion! It certainly wasn’t what I was expecting, but it was better than ever! This was just what I needed; it looked abandoned so I decided to see if I could get in. I went to the giant oak door and slowly turned the stiff handle, the door was opening, I could get in! The first step I took was into a big hallway with lots of famous paintings on the walls, they were very dusty so it was hard to make out what they were of. The high ceilings were being held up by old, dirty, oak beams and the paint was peeling off the walls. But I didn’t mind, it was better than I’d hoped for if you were talking about sizing! Slowly, I walked through the big hall and went through a wooden door it was the kitchen, I walked up to a practically black fridge and looked inside to see if there was any food there, apart from a cheese that looked like it had been there for years! I tested the tap to see if it worked, but the handle was so rusty that I couldn’t make it move. The next room I went into was a living room, there was a huge, old rug covering the whole floor and a big inglenook fireplace was guarding a big fire, “Good,” I thought. “I can collect firewood and start a fire if I get cold, there’s a big tree nearby so I can get all the sticks from it!” I went back into the hall and found a tall cream door under the stairs, I was expecting it to be a cupboard but it lead to a dining room! I didn’t think I would eat in there as the chairs were falling apart and the table was very scratched so I moved on through a door that was in the wall, it lead to a bathroom, “I won’t be having a bath here!” I thought, for the bath was chipped and the toilet had no water in. “I hope that there’s another toilet somewhere that I can actually use,” I thought. There was another door in the wall which lead back into the hall, there was only one other door which was made of pine. I pushed the handle down and the door creaked opened, inside was what looked like a study. All the furniture was just as old and dirty as the furniture in the other rooms. Next, I went up the big, winding staircase, the wooden stairs creaked beneath my feet and I was slightly worried that one might give-way. They didn’t though, so I got to the top safely. At the top of the big staircase was a door, I opened it and found a big bedroom, “If I got rid of all the dust on this bed I could sleep here.” I thought, there was a door in the corner of the room, I opened it and found myself in another bedroom. There was a small cot in the room so I defiantly knew I wouldn’t be sleeping there! After all, I had to think about where I would sleep as I might sleep there for the rest of my life. The next room that I went to was another bathroom! There was a bath with a tap that was just turn-able; a small bit of water came out as I turned the tap. It wasn’t very much but it was better than nothing. The toilet did have water in it and when I tested it, it flushed perfectly. There was also a sink, that didn’t work.

Chapter 4

In the gardens

As I walked back down the wooden stairs, I realised that I had forgotten to go outside and see what the garden was like. So I went to the big, oak back door and turned the ring handle. I instantly saw lots of grass and weeds in, what looked like it used to be a flower bed. It was a big garden but didn’t look very good because everything was either covered in weed, or long, thick grass. I was just about to go back inside when I noticed a small gate covered in green moss. I walked over to the gate, getting stung by a few nettles on the way, and turned the ring. Ahead all I could see was a small patch of grass with lots of brambles surrounding it. I walked around the small field, parting the brambles as I went trying not to get too scratched. There was nothing there so I turned to walk back to the mansion, or, as I would have liked to call it, my new home. I was just by the door when I heard a rustle…

Chapter 5

A mysterious face and an unusual lace

 I turned round, a face was peeping in at me from behind a bush, it was a man’s face. That’s about all I saw, as the face disappeared as soon as it saw that I had looked round. That was when the thought struck me, “What if this house isn’t abandoned! What if there are living here, or working here!” But then I dismissed that idea, the house was far too dusty and tumbledown to live or work in. You’d either need to be desperate for a home (like me.) Or be working on something secret so you’d need somewhere that no-one would ever guess where you were. I tried to brush that idea from my head; I didn’t really like the idea of living in a place where a complete stranger was working on the secret of a bomb or something. Slowly, I crept round the corner where I had seen the face to see if I could find it again. There was nothing there, so I went back into the house, I went back upstairs and looked through the rooms to make sure I hadn’t missed any rooms. I didn’t find a room, but I did find a shoelace, it was in the doorway of the study. Brown and with some sort of weird pattern on it is how I’d describe it. I decided to see if I could make out some of the words on the paper that was on the old desk. The letters where far too small and faded to make anything at all out though. So I gave that idea up, but as I looked around the study a bit closer, I saw a magnifying glass. “Maybe can make some of the writing out using this!” I thought, “But is it to smudged?” It wasn’t, and this is what I saw through the magnifying glass.

 

Find the secret and you will see,
The evil things in this country,
Think of puff and think of down,
The population will be no crown.

 

“What on earth could that mean?” I thought, “Whatever it is I don’t think I like it,” I didn’t really find anything else so I started to wonder what the time was. “Oh no” I thought, “I forgot to bring my watch.” Seeing as every single clock was about 60 years old I had to judge what the time was by how light it was. So, that night I waited until it was dark before I went to bed. I had brushed all the dust off it beforehand so I didn’t sneeze as much as I would have. The mattress wasn’t overly comfy but I did get to sleep fairly quickly. In the morning (or at least when it was light) I lay thinking about the face from behind the bush. “The shoelace must belong to the same person as the face does!” is what went through my head. I got the shoelace from on top of the old chest of draws and examined it a bit closer. It was long, brown and had a little mud at one of the ends. “I wonder if the person has realised that they’ve lost their shoelace yet?” I thought, at that moment I just thought that the person had just been having a walk, seen the house and had a snoop round for fun. But no, I was completely wrong; in fact it was the absolute opposite to what I thought…

Chapter 6

A listen through the door and a great big shock

The next day at about nine o’clock am was the 29th of May (I had been keeping track from since I left home.) I got out of bed and went downstairs to find something to eat and drink out of my small bag. I began to wonder what I would do when the food ran out. It didn’t matter about water as the tap upstairs worked and there was always the toilet for emergencies… I came to the conclusion that I would just have to eat what I had as slowly as possible. I would decide what to do when the food ran out when I was low on supply. I went outside to the garden for some fresh air and strangely, heard the front door shut when I had come out of the back door. “The person must have thought that I was out, or that I was just snooping that day when he saw me. Or it could be that he realised he had lost his shoelace!” But then I remembered about the old piece of paper that I had found. What if it had a link to the person? What if the person was planning something? I knew at that moment that I had to get to that piece of paper to keep for myself before the other person did. What if it was too late? I rushed inside to the study door and then stopped, there were voices, two men’s muffled voices coming from inside the study. I crept as close as I could to the door to see if I could hear what they were saying. I hoped that they wouldn’t be sleeping here as that would mean me leaving! “So Bob,” said a low, man’s voice, “Yes Jim,” said, who I thought was Bob,

“We need to find out what this old piece of paper that my father left for me when he died means.” Replied Jim,

“Yes, now your father was pretty evil wasn’t he, a bit like us.” Bob said, laughing at the last bit. “The funny thing is,” started Jim, who then paused. “Is that the other day, I was round the bush in the garden of this funny old place and I saw a young girl of about eight or nine looking in the brambles.” I think that I must have gone red at this bit. “So he was spying on me was he?”I thought. They both went silent for a while after that until Bob said, “Also, I had a spare shoelace in my pocket which I must have dropped somewhere in this wretched place.”

“That stupid girl probably took it, we’ll have to watch out for her.” Jim replied. “Anyway, back to business, let’s try and work out this letter.”

“I wish your father had made it a bit easier to understand,” moaned Bob.

“I think that he wanted us to do something for him, something bad perhaps?” Jim said.

“Yeah,” agreed Bob, “But I’ve got to go in five minutes so make it quick!”

“Ok, so I think that it is defiantly something to do with royalty, because it said about being crowned.” Said Jim, “Possibly, or it could be something to do with going down something. Do you agree?” Bob said,

“I really don’t know, but shall we meet tomorrow, same time, same place?” Jim asked,

“Yes, we’ll stay for an hour to give us more time.” Bob said,

“Ok then, more evil talk tomorrow, bye,”

“Bye.”

I was shocked, and just in the nick of time, ran back upstairs. Glad they were leaving but worried about what they would do…

Chapter 6

Following the men and running!

The men came back the following morning, but this time went into the lounge. I saw that they had their backs to me; I crept into the room and snuck behind the sofa. “Well,” said Bob, “I had the idea that instead of talking in this old, smelly place that we should talk whilst walking outside.”

“Good idea,” agreed Jim, “But just this once.” The men got up and walked to the door, once I heard the front door shut, I went and opened it. I was quite annoyed that they had decided to walk and talk as it meant that I had to follow them. I also had to try and remember the way so I could get back. It was quite hard not to be seen as they would keep turning around to check that no-one was following them. I was quite annoyed when they said that they would go back to their homes because they had really only said the same as yesterday. Maybe this and maybe that, I think blah and blur, is about all they said. The men walked their own separate ways, but at that moment, I took a step. Onto a twig! It broke beneath my feet, I desperately tried to find a hiding place, but it was too late. The men spun round and saw me, I ran, the men chased me! “So this is the little rascal that picked up my shoelace,” I heard Bob say.

“She’s been following us!” Jim said, I kept on running; I was heading for the mansion. I would lock the doors before the men got there. I ran up the hill to the house and in through the door. I turned the handle on the front door to lock it and did the same to the back door. I was just in time as the men started to bang on the door! “OPEN UP!” yelled Jim,

“AND STOP SPYING ON US!” Bob shouted.

Then Jim stopped shouting and asked, “How much do you know?”

“Only that you two have been meeting here,” I lied.

“Good,” Bob said, “But anymore spying and you’re in for it!”

“Alright,” I said, but I knew that I would follow them again. As I heard the men walk away, I slouched down with relief. But it wasn’t all over yet, as I found out the next day…

Chapter 7

Spying again, running again and back to the house again

There was something flapping in the wind on the ground outside, I could see it from my window. It must have been about 7:00am. I went outside and found that it was a piece of paper, I turned to scrunch it up, but then I saw. It was the paper! The one that the men had been looking at! “It must have blown out of Jim’s pocket!” I thought, I ran inside and started reading it. “Hmm,” I thought, it was about all I could think. The paper made no sense at all, I folded it up and went outside to try and find something sticky. In the end I got a little tree sap that was dripping down an oak tree at the bottom of the big hill. I applied a little to the paper and stuck it into the pocket of my, by now, very muddy jeans so it wouldn’t blow away. The men came back again later, but this time, stayed inside the garden. “That absolute brat of a girl must have taken the piece of paper!” Bob almost shouted when he said this, “She must know more than she said she did or she wouldn’t have taken the paper would she?” Jim said, his face looking grim. Then I really did blow it! I took a step closer to see if I could hear the men better and, fell! I must have tripped on something but whatever it was made me fall slap bang over. The men spun round as if they had seen a ghost, but I didn’t waste any time running. I jumped to my feet and stumbled back through the house and down the hill. But Bob and Jim wouldn’t easily give up either; they sprinted after me as fast as their legs would carry them! I found myself running so far that I ended up in a village. There was a market on so I managed to hide behind one of the stalls. People didn’t really take any notice of me as it was busy and I just looked like one of the kids playing hide and seek. A few seconds later the men appeared and started asking people if they had seen a girl of about eight or nine. Most people just said that there were lots of eight and nine year olds here. I sighed with relief as someone said this; luckily the men had only seen the back of me or a glimpse of my face before so they didn’t have a very good description of me. Finally, the men gave up looking and went back out of the market. I followed them to see if they went back to the house or not, they didn’t, so I did.

 

Chapter 8

Missing men

I was sure the men would come back the next day, but they didn’t. So I waited for them the day after that, but they didn’t come. Or the day after that or even that. “They must have found another hiding place, without a nine year old girl there,” I thought. It was funny (not literally) but the day I stopped waiting for Jim and Bob, a newspaper was on the doorstep. “Oh no, the men must have reported a missing girl to the newspapers! They must have delivered it to me!” I was wrong though, as it had been left open on a page which read,

Missing men
Two men named Jim Tye and Bob Patingson
Have been reported missing. The strange thing is
though, is that it was someone called Bob Tye
who reported this.

Now I was quite confused, and worried. Why would someone report themselves missing? Why would they give their real name to the newspapers? Why would they even put it in the newspapers in the first place? I now knew that it must have been Bob and Jim that put it on the doorstep; why else would it be left open on that particular page? Also newspapers aren’t usually delivered to old, abandoned houses, are they? So many questions with so little answers, but would I ever find the answers? “Time will tell,” I thought to myself, “Time will tell…”

Chapter 9

Missing paper

I ripped that particular page out of the newspaper and went upstairs to stick it in my jeans pocket with the paper using the remaining sap. But the paper was gone! I was flabbergasted. I hadn’t worn my jeans since I had put the paper in and the window hadn’t been left open so it couldn’t have blown away! There was no hole in the pocket so it couldn’t have fallen out, I checked anyway and it hadn’t. I hadn’t taken it away and nobody else had been in the house. Or had they? That was the only other solution, Jim and Bob had stolen it! I stood there staring at the pocket in my jeans. I looked around to see if there were any foot-prints or anything, but everything was normal. Exceedingly annoyed as I was, the main thing that worried me was the missing men. I looked round the house to check for the paper, I thought of it as a very slim chance that I would find it. I didn’t see anything suspicious or find the paper. In a way it was disappointing, but I wasn’t really expecting to find anything. Annoyed as I was, I couldn’t help but feel cross with myself for not expecting that the men would steal it. I couldn’t exactly do anything about it so all I did, was get on with life.

Chapter 11

Until next time

Really, all I needed to do then was find out what the men were up to, and tell the police. I know what happened, but you don’t yet. You can do though, by reading the next three books. Unless you don’t want to find out what happens, I myself would suggest that you read the next books one by one and find out the men’s secret and what the paper means. The last words from me in this book are, until next time…

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